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Summary of Consultation : The Intro makes the first impression

I have seen several ways students end up making a poor first impression.

1) Broken English or basic grammatical errors in the introduction

2) Disconnected sentences in the introduction, because the student wants to explain terms or ideas separately, so the introduction loses flow

3) The introduction does not focus on the issue/concern that the question is asking about because the student just describes the topic generally, or because the student excludes the keywords of the question (the essay could be directed in the wrong way as a result)

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